Kiran Madhavan 10/3/21
Chemistry Current events review
Citations:
Neuman, Scott. “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance.” NPR, NPR, 23 Sept. 2021, https://www.npr.org/2021/09/23/1040035430/flying-microchip-sand-grain-northwestern-winged.
I reviewed the article titled, “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance” by Scott Neuman, which explains how scientists have developed tiny microchips that can sense the environment around them and gather data. This device’s design was inspired by the samara fruit, better recognized as the seeds that propel down from maple trees. John A. Rogers, who was the leader of development on these microchips says that they are designed so that “as these structures fall through the air, the interaction between the air and those wings cause a rotational motion that creates a very stable, slow-falling velocity,” (Rogers). However, these devices may be even more impressive than these free-falling seeds. The fall time needed to be lengthened in order for the microchips to collect the needed data. Computer models were made by team member Yonggang Huang in order to find a way to make the chips fall at a slow enough rate. Rogers claims that, “We think that we beat nature… At least in the narrow sense that we have been able to build structures that fall with more stable trajectories and at slower terminal velocities than equivalent seeds that you would see from plants or trees” (Rogers). On top of this achievement, the microchips are already being dubbed the smallest ever man-made flying structure. The size and slow fall of the microchips alone can lead to many other tiny devices being created and helping out with monitoring other issues in the world. As for the actual purpose, scientists expect that these machines can be used to monitor contamination, pollution levels, survey populations, and possibly even track diseases.
The microchips discussed in this article could have a direct impact on society, as the issues they can monitor are all very prominent in our world today. Tracking Covid could play an important role in slowing the spread, and monitoring communities more prone to this virus. Rising levels of pollution could also be monitored by these microchips. The size of them is also very impressive, and I think we will see many more microsized devices implemented as time goes on.
This article was very well written and straight to the point, which I liked while reading and trying to understand it. Neuman did a great job at hooking the reader in, even in the first sentence, by saying, “It's neither a bird nor a plane, but a winged microchip as small as a grain of sand that can be carried by the wind as it monitors such things as pollution levels or the spread of airborne diseases” (Neuman). This not only interested me, but also quickly told the reader what the microchips did. However, a weakness of this was how the purpose of the microchips was only really mentioned in that first sentence and a little further down, hidden between talking about the design process. While the size and method of creating these chips was intriguing, I feel that if this was the main purpose of the article, it could have been clearly stated so. Instead the first subheading is labeled, “Tiny fliers that can gather information about their surroundings” and only really talks about how they will fly and be spread about. This could have been simply improved if Neuman had maybe labeled the section in a way that showed it was mainly about the flight course. This would have cleared some things up for the reader, and I instead had to search around a bit to find the reasoning behind creating the microchips.
Konstantinos Koloutsos
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Current events
10/14/21
https://www.npr.org/2021/09/23/1040035430/flying-microchip-sand-grain-northwestern-winged
Neuman, Scott. “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance.” NPR, NPR, 23 Sept. 2021, https://www.npr.org/2021/09/23/1040035430/flying-microchip-sand-grain-northwestern-winged.
I really enjoyed reading Kiran’s review on “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance” by Scott Neuman, it was a very well written review. One thing that Kiran did very well was getting direct quotes from the article, the direct quotes not only demonstrated her understanding of the topic but also portrayed the message to the readers in a great way. The quotes are an effective way to guide the reader through the review and help keep them engaged throughout the review. Another thing that Kiran did well was explaining to the reader what the microchips were made for. Kiran explains the different purposes like track diseases and track population numbers. This helps the reader understand why it is important to implement this technology. Lasly Kiran did a great job of critiquing the article, Kiran was able to state the strengths of the article while also giving her opinion as to what the article could have done better. She not only states the weaknesses but also gives suggestions as to how to improve or get rid of them.
This review was very informative and very well written, however, there are a few things that could’ve been improved. For example, although the review included direct quotes from the article, there were no statistics or data. Using data and statistics can keep the reader more and more interested in the topic. Another thing that could’ve been improved on, would be the second paragraph. The connections made to society was just population and covid spread. What else can these tiny microchips do? More information on how this technology will impact us in our everyday lives would make this review much better.
I chose to read Kiran’s review because I love technology and I enjoy learning about new technology and how it’s being used. Nowadays technology is not only everywhere, it is also being invented and used in different ways almost every single day. It’s so fascinating how this tiny piece of tech could do so much and help us with so many problems. One thing that I found really fascinating is that this piece of technology can compile so much data. The data collected could make such a huge impact on how we go about our everyday lives, like what route we take when we go to work or school.
Declan Denning
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321
10/19/21
“Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance.” NPR, NPR, 23 Sept. 2021
Link to Kiran’s original article
Neuman, Scott. “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance.” NPR, NPR, 23 Sept. 2021, https://www.npr.org/2021/09/23/1040035430/flying-microchip-sand-grain-northwestern-winged.
Link to Quinn’s review of the article
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I am commenting on Kiran Madhavan’s review of the article, “Flying Microchips the Size of a Sand Grain Could Be Used for Population Surveillance.” NPR, NPR, 23 Sept. 2021.
This review did a very good job of explaining how scientists have developed tiny microchips that can sense the environment around them and gather data to accomplish tasks such as monitoring contamination and tracking population.
Three things the writer did well was that she summarized well the design of the microchip; she clearly explained how the design improved what occurs in nature when the Samara seeds propel down from maple trees because it slowed the rate down to a stable rate; and she highlights how the small size of the chip will allow it be used easily for a lot of purposes.
Two things the writer could have improved was she could have gone into more depth about how the device actually works for specific uses, such as how it actually counts the population and she only discussed one weakness of the original article- its focus on the design of the microchip only.